Confusion

by Dave   Sep 30, 2005


Friendship like ours is very hard to find
by night hearts taking over leaving it behind
my looks are stopping you but still you feel guilt
but what of the future when we wither and wilt
I need you in my life because I care
for you and your feelings witch are still there
Confusion taking over my body by storm
when my life is over will you be there to mourn
on to for fill my life in another way
time to turn my back and look away
I was tempted to ask you I want to its true
this is for the next time I try to love you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Okay i understood this up until the few last lines so from my understanding its a poem about confusion because you have a very good friend that you love in a different way?? is that right i dont know thats what i got

    this is for the next time I try to love you

    what do you mean by this? the poem? or whats for the next time you try to love whoever?

    but other then the confusion i got trying to comprehend you flowed well and rhymes great

    4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Amazing job. i really enjoyed this poem alot. It seems like she loves you and stuff but you are holding back or something because you don't know if you should love her or not. OR you need to tell her your feelings who knows life is pretty messed up even at any age so it could be anything but anyway like your title said anyway lol. But thanks for the comment means alot to me. Also keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

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