Broken

by jac   Oct 2, 2005


Just a broken heart
innocent and frail
a broken heart
afraid to fail
to fail in life
to fail in love
i just feel so broken
dropped from above
unhealing, shattered
my heart is so battered
lost and confused
put into a blender
everything is so mixed
blended together
my emotions withered
down to nothing
ashes and flames
to burn in hell
and so will that guy
he deserves to die

*yea, i was in a bad mood when i wrote this... not too good.. oh well..*

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  • 18 years ago

    by tigga47 aka Crissie

    Aw i love how you wrote this ... 5/5 crissie

  • 18 years ago

    by Kitten3

    This is a totally awsome poem. If this is bad work for you you are definatly a great poet. Heck I know this I've been reading like all of your works and you totally rock.

  • 18 years ago

    by brit

    I liked this poem alot...i like how you write what you feel. keep on writing...i look forward to reading some more of your work soon.

  • 18 years ago

    by Serendipity08

    I hope no guy has hurt you, because they are not worth the trouble!! Take it from someone who knows. Keep writing!!

  • 18 years ago

    by marie

    Hey thanks for your comment on my peom. Think this is my favourite one of yours. I really felt it from the very begining with the opening line. Have to be honest and say that i wasnt sure bout the last 2lines the first time i read it, i can see where you coming from but it seemed to ruin the flow a bit. It is very good, you shouldnt critisise yourself at the bottom of the poem like that though! x

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