We (You and I)

by Anthony   Oct 2, 2005


We were good,
We were bad.
We were happy,
We were sad.
We both laughed,
And we cried.
We were honest,
And we lied.
Then you took my heart away,
And you never gave it back.
You turned my heart from golden,
To the deepest, darkest black.
We stayed foes,
We stayed friends.
We stayed "together
To the end."
We got up,
We went down.
We lived Green,
We died brown.
We said that it was over,
Yet we never split apart.
I still don't understand,
I guess you did have a heart.
When there was nothing left to salvage,
And our relationship was dead,
I told you not to kill yourself,
So you killed me instead...

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  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    I'd say this is beautiful
    intense & i can relate totally... !
    5/5
    cuz its worth it

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany

    I loved it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Hey great. really, i loved the style. keep on writing this!

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Damnit! Stop writing more poems then me! It's effing unbelievable!

    My favourite lines were:

    "You turned my heart from golden,
    To the deepest, darkest black."

    Also the last couple of lines:

    "I told you not to kill yourself,
    So you killed me instead."

    *slap* That's for being better than me! =)

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by scoopy

    That poem waz so good!! 2 5's, keep writing good poems!! always keep ya head up so yeah! if u can check out sum of my poems!! iight thanx!! l8t4z from tha 1 *n* only scoopy

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