Everyday

by aaron c s   Oct 3, 2005


I see you walk toward me everyday
You look so graceful in your beauty
Watching you lips move to say
That you want to be with me
I want you girl
To be able to kiss
To make you my world
As I hold your hips
I look into your eyes
Holding you closer than ever before
Longing to make you satisfied
Falling for you more and more
You're so beautiful my love
As gorgeous as an angel
Sent to me from above
I know you're not perfect, I can tell
But you're pretty close
I can tell by your smile
I know you know
That I've loved you all this while
This feeling for you I didn't expect
But I guess it was bound to happen
You are the best girl I've ever kept
I hope, I pray this will never end

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  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is good.It could use a little tightening up/revising, but it flows well and it is saturated with emotion and is so sincere..I'm a sap for love poems and really like this one.
    Oh, and thanks for the comments on a couple of my pieces!

  • 18 years ago

    by nightschild

    What a beautiful poem
    well done
    i feel all arm and fuzzy now!
    xoxox
    ~*mary*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Awwww another great poem, i really hope you share these with this person your a very talented writer!!! your flow is amazing, you use a good vocab, and the rhymes are all right on 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    That's a really sweet poem. I love how you say she isn't perfect, but she's "pretty close". Not many people can get away with writing love poems, and not sounding completely repetitive. You pulled it off though, amazing job.
    ~Jaime

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Wow very nice poem. You could tell that all your emotion was in that! The ending truly was something though But this poem was awesome! Great job with everything very talented. 5/5!

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