You suffered

by Bradley Peter   Oct 3, 2005


Were the walls filled in secrets
were the floors covered in blood
were your dreams squashed like insects
was your life trod in the mud

did you scream in despair
did you cry many tears
did no one even care
did you drown in all your fears

are you taking all the blame
for things you never done
are you playing alone with a game
that isn't any fun

do you need someone to save you
do you need someone to care
do you need someone to hold on to
do you need somebody there

you suffered far too long
so save you i must
you fought them all along
in me you now should trust

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  • 18 years ago

    by Koriey Korrupted

    When i red this poem it really felt like it was written for me.you capture so many feelings of torture and heart ache.5/5.sorry!!!!i've been really busy or i would have gotten more comments out.thanx.BTW-i did put you on my favorites list.thanx again for voting,and commenting.(in a hurry)lol

    your words talk throug my heart
    they make me feel numb
    joy and darkness somehow depart
    your poem express me and then some

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffany Danielle Allen

    Great poem 5/5