WHY DID YOU HAVE TO LEAVE ME????
by Green M&M Oct 4, 2005
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Your gone now and i cant get you back, |
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17 years ago
by Sandra D
This is an awesome poem. there's so much emotion, i really like it!! 5/5!!
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18 years ago
by Stabbylou
Wow, powerful and emotional poem. The shortness of it adds to it's impact. Good work, take care.
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18 years ago
by Milton
It was vert emotional. If the story is true, then that's very sad to hear. She may need help with her life. I liked the poem, Good stuff.
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18 years ago
by Mafia Cilla
Good poem but i know you can do better
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18 years ago
by Truest Lies
Yes, it had a nice flow but it would sound better if you "cleaned it up" such as better language, and clearer intentions. Of course, all writing is just a sense of style, and it is not necessarily a mistake.
Good Writing!
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