My Deadly Secret Love

by PassingAngel   Oct 5, 2005


My delusional thoughts of you liking me back
Haunts me in my dreams
And I wake up screaming
Yet I hear nothing
Thinking that you like me too
I think of nothing but you
My mind is driving me crazy
Oh won't you please just kill me
Cause I know you'll hurt me sooner or later anyway

I lay here for hours on my bed
Just thinking of all the things I could've said
To explain all my feelings for you
I take a knife and carve your name
In my delicate skin
The stress you cause is enough to kill me
So let the pain begin.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good, not my usual style but pretty good. One thing though, remember that you don't have to have complete sentences.

    Like
    ~ lie here for hours on my bed
    thinking of all the things I could've said
    To explain all my feelings for you
    I take a knife and carve your name
    upon my soft delicate skin
    The stress you cause is enough to kill me
    So let the final pain begin.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tess

    OMG i loved it
    keep up the great work babe 5/5 plz return the favour

  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Beautiful poem !!
    Really nicely written, i liked it a lot.
    The rhymes aren't planned to be in certain patrts which makes it read more naturally.

    xxx cici xxx

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