by Molly Elizabeth Oct 5, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Lately all I feel is constant pain |
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It's supposed to be that way, but thanks |
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Hey, i thought this was good. but i think you sounded a lot like u were just talking. if u stick some more figurative language in there it will be awsome. i think it really captured ur emotions well though. i hope u feel better! |
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Thanks... |
by jhosy
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Wow, Great poem. And if this is how you feel, Then im really sorry and i hope you feel better hun. Much props |