by Jesse James Oct 6, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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You broke down, |
by LadyPearl
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Pretty good, not my usual style |
by AhmadAfaneh
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Wow!!! nice one ... keep it up. |
by Jesse James
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It goes well to a song I was listening to... >_< I re-read it and couldn't work out why I didn't like it... THEN I realised it's rhythm... Lol. |
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The flow wasnt that good....you like to write sad poems? i like dark ones...and sad ones also...4/5 |