Her Blue eyes

by Russell   Oct 6, 2005


Her Blue Eyes

She never told
Because nobody would listen
But you could tell
Because of how her blue eyes glisten

Something was wrong
She could of used my help
Or just a place where she could belong
But she believed in self-help

Her blue eyes are now black
The demon consumes her
And wont let her come back
All this pain begins to transfer

To the only people that care
help the only way they can
Everyone on the outside was unaware
How this all began

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natasha

    Wauw.... yeah wauw seems appropriate :p
    This poem is amazing, I reconize the symptomes... Bright eyes go black. Damn! I like it a lot, don't think anything less then a 5/5 would be justified.

  • 18 years ago

    by alwaysremeniceus

    Thats really good... people say that someone's eyes are the windows to their soul... i never believed til i looked into the eyes of my bf (we have online relationship)... just for that one second... i could see all his sadness and pain...
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Not a particularly long piece, but it's very riveting, to use a very neglected word. ;) I like your style very much.

  • 18 years ago

    by (*andrea*hurtinside*)

    Oh my god thats me I can relate to everyword you just said and I have blue eyes too lol amazing!! 10/10

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Russell that was a real good one

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