I like it!

Great Poem My Friend...Un Poco Triste, Pero Espero Y Todo Este Bien! Cuidate Y Muchas Gracias Por Compartir Tus Poemas! 5/5 ^_^ Take Care

And time shall thus decay in these pathetic lies...so beautiful...your poetry is incredible. may i suggest though, that 'these pathetic lies' be revised. it weakens the poem quite a bit. maybe, 'in severed ties' or something, you know what I mean? just a suggestion, I still give it 5/5.

Great i love it. it really goes into it. that style is really effective, and it works really well.

Ruby

Great job, another superlative effort!!!

Absolutely amazing!!!! keep it up.

Very deep

I like the experimentation you got going on, i didnt like this form but hey at least you do different things...so good job again a great vocab and flow

Wow i learnt some thing! I can honestly say i have never heard of a Tetracty before.

It's different i like it.

as for the poem itself it is very good. and the style causes all the more of an impact to it.