Unknown Love

by Lady Vengeance   Oct 8, 2005


Love me tender, love me strong
say you've loved me all along.

hold me close, touch my face
we'll be together in this crowded place

stay with me, please be mine
with you there is no sense of time

i need you, as you need me
stay a while and you will see

don't leave now, please don't go
how i feel, you still don't know

you aren't mine, this can't be true
i am still in love with you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Heh . . again, I can really relate. This poem struck me really hard . . . It was short but very to the point again - excellently written, absorbs the reader wholey.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by President Dead

    Different setout, worx well i think, good one

  • 18 years ago

    by backporchpoet

    Awesome way of telling that sometimes the person you love doesn't love you back. Short and sad, and I'm loving it!
    Thanks for your comment on mine!
    Chao...

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I agree 100% great work once again by the ultimate suz
    love ya

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Great work once again. this one uses rhyming without becoming corny. its great, and the idea of it is wonderful

    Ruby

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