You broke my heart

by Valeria   Oct 8, 2005


U broke my heart into million pieces...and u just cannot see ..i want to be with u forever but that could never be.

i tell everyone that u don't like me
that is only one of my dreams to have u near me and never let you go.

But that is all it will ever be a dream that will never come true
my heart longs for Ur love ...but i cannot keep on cause I'm breaking apart..when i realize all of this is just a dream that will never be..:(

Plz comment plz plz this is my first poem and didnt write it ever before i just was thinking about that way i felt and as i was thinking i was typing...thanks u all very very much dont forget to comment
love u Valeria

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  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Hun...you are so talented. This poem is amazing, so I hope that you keep on writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lola Granny

    This was real good only suggestion is to cap the I's other than that it was a good poem keep up great writting

  • 18 years ago

    by amanda

    The poem is really good for your first poem i have a boy im crazy bout 2 but doesnt even notice me