What can you say

by ScarletHaze   Oct 8, 2005


What can you say to a girl that don't care?
who doesn't give a damn anymore?
one who don't care if the world ended tomorrow.
if no one was left at all.
what can you say to someone who's given up hope
one who just wishes to be all alone.
one who See's them self as different
forever marked by there past mistakes.
what can you say to someone so confused they no longer no right from wrong.
well if anybody has the answers please let me no cause it seems no one quite No's what to say.

lame i no but it is like twenty five to twelve at night!

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  • 18 years ago

    by lee

    Hey, this was a really good poem. i loved it. thanx for the comment! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Really great poem, and very true. take care xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Great job... again-- a piece of work that was really deep... you're talented

    Keep writing..

    Love,
    Ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Wonderful, Sad but oh so true, stay strong, man I wish i knew what to say

    Love Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    If somebody absolutly didn't care then they wouldn't want to know what someone could say to make them feel better...so really you wouldn't have to say anything to someone who didnt care lol but anyways this was really good except the few spelling errors (i know minor but they should be corrected anyways) you used *don't* when you should have used *dosn't* and also instead of writing *know* you wrote *no*

    but other then that great job i really liked the message this poem put out kinda like the helpless feeling that nobody can save you because your just a lost cause or something like that idea great job...5/5 i love your writing and enjoy reading it!!

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