My First Kiss

by x-Beth-x   Oct 9, 2005


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Taking you home,
We were in the back seat,
Me nurvice as hell,
Wondering when our lips would ever meet,

I said "you forgot",
You fealt so bad,
The night was hot,
Your everything I never had,

I turned to you and said,
"To bad you don't know what I'm thinking.",
You smiled and replied,
"Let me take a wild guess.",

Thats when it happend,
All of those feelings running through me,
Love, lust, the feeling of belonging,
My mind was shocked but my body had it comming,

After it happend I kissed him on the cheek,
And he asked "was I bad?",
I looked at him and replied "no",
I was still at a loss of words but man was I glad,

So it finally happend,
At the age of 14,
On October 8th 2005,
My very first kiss ever,

I love you Nick

~Anarchy

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Not your best, the rhymes were weird and everything but i think this deserves a 5 just because how cute it is and it's amazing that your first kiss was this special to you, i can't even remember mine. anyways i think this is a wonderful poem because you put so much expression into it.

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    I'm happy for you. Not everyones first kiss is sooo special. Your a lucky one lol

    ~~~amber~~~

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Aww congrats..im 14 2 i got my 1st kiss like about 2 weeks b4 u..neway GR8 poem! wow...u rok! keep up the gr8 work! im tryin 2 find sumthin bad but i cant..so yea...wow.

    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Aww i liked that, very cute i hope you too stay together and share many more kisses :) this is a good poem but keep an eye out for speeling mistakes k?

  • 18 years ago

    by sandra

    AWW!!! I'm SO Happy for you! Great poem. You Love Nick!!! ttyl! 5/5!!!

    ~Sandra

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