You're Gone. :'(

Awwl.. very nicely done.. sorry it took me soo long to write you a comment i have been soo busy.. but I am writing all five now! lol but i realli liked this poem esp. the begining 5/5

Hey girl i am really sorry you had to go through this heartbreak i hope you get better in time, just take it day by day and lean on your friends. hope you feel better soon 5.5 amzing job nice job showing your feelings

I agree with the other 2 , your true writing talent didn't shine through in this poem and exept for a missing letter in one of the stanzas I thought it was good, keep it up,

I liked this poem! i recommend you use stronger words to help get the point across and try to make the readers feel what you feel. you know, that feeling that you can definelty relate to something. but aside from that, i thought it was very good.
x0x0 heather

I gave you my all,
and you gave it all away.

that was my favorite stanza

okay i liked this poem it was very simple so i think it called for a better word choice but i like the message you put through but this poem really didnt make me feel your pain you know? like im sure you hurt pretty bad because the guy turned out to be a jerk but i just didnt get the strong feeling that i think i should have from this poem....4/5