Thank You

by Void   Oct 10, 2005


Not until I met you
did I really see
just how truly happy
one person can be.
At first you were a friend
one of the closest that I had
settled me down if i was angry
made me happy when i was sad
For that I thankyou.

And as we kept up talking
I liked you more and more
but even than i couldn't tell you
that it was you that i adore.
I liked you for who you were
and how you really cared
I could talk to you about anything
and you listened as i shared
For that I thankyou

And now as I sit here
thinking about you
I try to explain just how
my love for you is true.
Not only are you everything
my world, my happiness, my all
but you changed me as a person
for the better as I recall
you bring out the best in me
and i only see the best in you
so now that things are perfect,
i can finally tell you true.
I love you for who you are
I love you for who you make me
I love you for what we've become
I'll love you for eternity.

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  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMemoriex

    Another one of your masterpieces. You expressed everything perfectly.. and thanks for your comment. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Really great poem, there was rhyme in there, i was attached in the first paragraph i was stuck in it, and i had to keep reading thats the type of poem you want 5/5 ill ttyl

    PeAcE
    ~RiCo SmootH~

  • 18 years ago

    by Anthony

    Wow. Its so emotional. My favorite lines are
    And now as I sit here
    thinking about you
    I try to explain just how
    my love for you is true.
    Not only are you everything
    my world, my happiness, my all
    but you changed me as a person
    for the better as I recall
    Great job.

    ~Anthony

  • 18 years ago

    by David McIntosh

    Is there a 6 on the vote chart? Wow -I loved this poem Thank You very much

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Wonderful. its a very sweet and well written poem. i love it. ur use of language is very good, and helps get teh reader to connect
    good work

    Ruby