This is it (escape)

by ..::Angel of your darkness::..   Oct 11, 2005


This is it, isn't it?
What we've been waiting for
We're gonna get away from here
We'll get further than before

We don't know where we're going
But we're going there together
Staying Side by side
It's how it'll be forever

We're lost in this dark night
Don't know which way to go
It's hard to see through the mist
Through the falling snow

Are bodies are so cold
But we know we must escape
Are hearts and souls
The only possession we can take

Holding hands together
We'll look after each other
Nothing can part us
We've become like sister and brother

We're both so scared
But its this or die
The only thing keeping us going
Is the love we share inside

I feel we're going to make it
Just stay by me now
And we'll get away from this place
I promise. Someway, somehow..

This is only part one of the poem
The next bit will tell you where there running from, the darker side of the poem

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  • 18 years ago

    by lee

    Loved it! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Clown

    Hey there, I dont want to bother you, but I think you put me with a 10 year old girl. Dont want to do your job or anything, but I think you should of done a small reveiw to make sure the people you partnered up are more compatible. I read one of her poems and its all about friends and stuff, She writes well and all, for a little girl, but I'm afraid that if she reads mine, she might get the wrong message and have nightmars or something.

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticMystery

    Keep it up.

    Nana

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    It's a good part 1 since it builds suspense. I really hope the 2nd part is going to be way better than this because it is really good. Just the way it was structured leaves off with a question of what comes next. Cool job.
    ~Disturbed Unknown

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Nice one...can't wait to see the next one...can i save it...plz...this is so nice...i want to have a look at it each time i turn on my computer...plz...i won't steal it...just save it...tell me okey...and girl...you are our inspiration.

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