Sitting with myself.

by quietlybreaking   Oct 12, 2005


Mossy trunk supporting me,
tranquil.

Wind gusting across my face,
whispering.

Flowers swaying as one,
dance.

Birds sing sweet melodies,
rejoicing.

Beetles scurry along,
routine.

Beauty surrounding me,
Life.

*Flow needs improvement, and will be extended in length later. simple thoughts i needed to write before they were forgotten. much love, all suggestions welcome. mwahh, aylz*

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  • 17 years ago

    by lana

    I also like this
    its your own and for that is beautiful
    what a great poem

    lana

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    I think it's good the way it is...but i think if you improve it...it would be perfect...nice one girl...i give you 5/5 for this...if you edit it...do tell me..i might give you 100/5 then...hehe...you deserve it...