Together Forever Pt. I

by SuperJenius   Oct 13, 2005


-She ran to the woods , knowing what must be done. She took out her razor and pills. Trying to decide what would kill her , which one ?
She remembered seeing him , her beloved. Him with another girl. So she ran straight to her place knowing what must be done.
_Once he saw his loving girl run through the shadows , he knew she saw it all. Him with another girl , them talking and laughing. He ran after her but couldn't catch up
-A shaky hand slowly making the first cut. A single tear fell from her eye.
_Where would she go? If she thought him unfaithful , where would she run? He needed to find her , needed to tell her the truth. He would never find another, another girl to love.Where could she be? Where might she go? He needed to find her.
-He had to have known that she would find out That he stopped loving her and no longer cared. She sliced a few more times but her pain did not ease. She thought to herself " Killing myself is what he must need"
TO BE CONTINUED

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow this is really a heartfelt poem and I could almost shed a tear reading this piece. So well expressed and well penned. Well deserved 5/5. tc plse rrc my poem English for the confused.

    With love
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Wow wow wow.. i want more going to read the 2nd part! great job!
    .x

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Feels like a story of fiction! 5/5