The Death Of Me

by Savannah Marie   Oct 13, 2005


Ill take you for a ride
through the terrors of my mind
don't tell any one what you see
or ill never become free
fasten your seat belt
and get ready to feel what i felt
you hear me scream at night
you can see the blood drip through the light
you watch the knife go in so deep
slowly now I'm falling asleep
your now watching me fight even through my dreams
i cant escape any where is what it seems
your standing here watching me
but you don't understand why my life i must flee
as you watch the torment and hate i receive
you finally understand why i have to leave
as your watching me more clear
you just see me lying still and you run near
but you are to late to help
as you see me lying cold and dead you let out a yelp
you finally understood what was wrong
but deep in your heart you've known all along
all along to yourself you have lied
that you were slowly killing me inside
now your sad and crying
and as i watch from above i don't know why
the whole time you knew i was dying inside
but you did nothing to stop any of this
you pick me up and now you see the message on my wrist
i loved him was all that was there
under the blood and tears it said it so bare
its all your fault and now you see
that you were the death of me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Savannah Marie

    Please vote and comment on my other pomes to i promise that i will vote and comment every one that votes and comments mine!
    *-*Savannah*-*

  • 18 years ago

    by Robin

    That was really beautiful. Very sad, though, I can relate to a lot of it. I have some similar stuff, please check it out if you get a chance.
    5/5 from me- all the way. nice job, and hope you're okay.

    XoxoX
    Robin