To feel alone

by cowgirlstar26   Oct 14, 2005


The pain is overwhelming
My feelings never showing
I'm so sick of smiling
Inside I'm slowly dying

The razor pulled across my wrist
releasing the flow with it's gentle kiss
in the end it's me no one will miss
maybe when I'm gone I'll grant their wish

No one heard my dying pleas
no one sees me as I cry and bleed
maybe when i'm gone they'll all see
all the pain they inflicted upon me

I never told you about these things I didn't show
my heart now broken, withered and cold
will anyone love me as a lay against this stone?
one thing I've realized, I wasn't ment to feel alone

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Wow, for me that just seemed to flow in a ghost like manor (why i have no idea) i suppose its quite eerie and i like the odd flow pattern. Btw ur already in my favourites...

  • 18 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    Great poem u wrote here.. i loved how u put your words together it's so good..5/5 thanks for commenting on my poem.. it meant alot to me.. im gonna check out your other poems.. much love.

  • 18 years ago

    by StarGirl

    Really good hun. I'm sorry you feel that way but I think we've all felt that way, or at least thought about it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    I really can relate to this. Keep up the great writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I love the beggining and i loved the end of this poem very good intro and conclusoin to it the second stanza was my favorite and my least favorite

    The razor pulled across my wrist
    releasing the flow with it's gentle kiss

    that was my favorite part

    no one will notice my sudden absence
    maybe when I'm gone I'll grant their wish

    that was my least favorite part it didn't rhyme or flow

    but yeah other then that small mistake great job 5/5

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