Broken(evry thing is nothing)

by daniel   Oct 15, 2005


You know youre going to die
no matter how hard you try
throught all these lies
that made your tears fall
no one was there to catch them
no one was there to say Im sorry
no one to say every thing will be okay
they all hated you because you were different
they hated to see you smile
just when you picked yourself up
they kicked you back down
Beat you until you bled no more
then left you to lie on the cold hard ground, broken beyond repair

No light, Just darkness
No happiness, Just sorrow
No laughter, Just tears
No life, Just death
Not any thing, Just nothing

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its not good but please comment im only a begginer

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fruitloop XxProblem ChildxX

    I love the way you right.
    ~sarah~

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey daniel, I liked the way you wrote this one. that was a unique poem.
    it was sad but really well written.
    take care,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by LovelessAndConfused

    Very sad but nicely written

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Daniel, that was a great poem. I love how you put all your emotions and depth into your poetry. Hope to read more of your work.

    -Jennifer.

  • 18 years ago

    by christina marie

    It's a good poem, don't tell yourself otherwise! 5/5

    ~*♥Lollipop Sweetie♥*~

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