Jagged Angel

by Bobby Brownlie   Dec 5, 2003


The relationship between the two was
Too strong to break,
Until the man realized years later,
That it was all a big mistake.

She told him they would be together forever
Until the very end of each others life.
Until the day that she was untrue,
That made him upset and cry,
As he sadly grabbed for the knife.

Sad and upset she immediately came over
To the man she loved and wanted to be with,
Little did she know,
His pain would all be over,
With the simple move of a slit.

She stopped him in time to apologize,
And to say that she was in guilt,
They both worked it out,
Regardless of the pain they both felt.

Now everything was back on track,
As everything was meant to be,
But he never saw her dark side,
She had kept it blind,
So blind for him not to see.

She led him down the road of fake love and lust,
He was blinded,
And never knew
That she would leave him in the dust.

He was so happy with her
And decided to wed and get engaged,
It went on for a while,
Until again she was untrue,
Which this time he was filled confusion,
Every time he thought about it,
It made him become more raged.

They talked it over as she told him it was time for the relationship
Between the two to end,
With tears in his eyes he asked her
?Since it is all over can I at least be your friend?

She then turned around quickly
And told him Absolutely Not!!?
Right then and there his heart tied,
Tied in an untieable knot.

He stared out the window as he watched his lost love go out the door,
He couldn?t believe that he had been used,
As he was the blind fish,
And she was the lure.

Filled with grief and all of her caused pain,
He frantically grabbed the knife,
And without a doubt he took a slice into his vein.

As he felt all the frustration flow out of his vein,
From his mind,
He then closed his eyes,
And he realized who he would leave behind.

Scared of what he did he frantically called,
And was immediately given help,
All the pain she caused him,
Would never leave,
And would always be felt.

To this day she is always with him,
Where ever he is and she is never far,
All he does is raise his arm,
And she is there on his wrist,
The permanent,
Love Cursed Scar.

i know it is long, but it is true plz vote and comment
thanks

© Bobby Brownlie 2004

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  • 19 years ago

    by shenoa

    wow, i have to say, this is my favorate poem of yours. twisted, that end. i really liked it.

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