Look At Me

by jac   Oct 16, 2005


Would you look at me now?
See my sad, broken face?
This is all because of you
Putting me into this disgrace.
You've driven me to this point
Now I only want to die
My tears mix in my blood
From all the times I cry.
I just cut and cut away
To release my inset sorrow
Sometimes I only pray
That I wont live to see tomorrow.
These scars shall forever show
They'll be a constant, sad reminder
Of all the hurt I will forever know
And how I wanted it all to end.
I hardly know what happened
It all came and went so fast
I still remember, we were so close
Now it's all just a part of the past.

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  • 16 years ago

    by sara

    Great simply amazing 5/5 is less

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    Awesome.. just simply great

  • 17 years ago

    by im no one

    Good poem, not nessacarily good, but you shaped your emotions into words really well

  • 17 years ago

    by marie

    I can really relate to this poem, really enjoyed reading it. thank you

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Here I am commenting again
    I totally lov this poem
    gr8 job. well expressed
    keep up the good work