Love close Yet Far

by LadyPearl   Oct 17, 2005


Determined that love won't get to me
wanting things what's meant to be
you didn't know me, I didn't know you
yet my new love turned so true

But because of who I am, and who you are
our dream together seemed so far
the interests we liked we share
but our cultures we couldn't dare

afraid to be hurt like others
exchanging love for another
making myself cold
for you I couldn't hold

yet every chance you get
from the day we met
the words that you say
your love seemed to stay

even my friends realize
behind the disguise
that twinkle in your eye
a secret message lied

we never admitted how we felt
of all the feelings that we delt
for a while I let go
hoping that you would also

now new thoughts arise
making me think twice
letting back my desire
to be your one and only fire

I love you and always will
through my doubts I will still
think of you in my dreams
in my sleep a smile shall beam

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This poem is so amazing. I love the last stanza. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    "I love you and always will
    through my doubts I will still
    think of you in my dreams
    in my sleep a smile shall beam"

    I can't say this have never happen to me, because i did. I sometimes wake up laughing because I am so happy.=)

    Lovely poem.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by x Saiya

    Great job! I've read some of your other poems before you replied to my board and you are very talented.
    5/5

    "now new thoughts arise
    making me think twice
    letting back my desire
    to be your one and only fire"

    That was my favorite stanza as well.

    Keep on writing ;)

    Saiya

  • 18 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Great job! It was very well-written! You have a lot of talent! Keep it up! My fav. stanza was:

    "now new thoughts arise
    making me think twice
    letting back my desire
    to be your one and only fire"

    Keep writing and I look forward to reading more of your poetry!
    Love always,
    ~BJ~

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