Very nicely written. The rhyme scheme was a little hard to follow at times but the message was clear and it was a very nice topic to write about. I especially loved the last stanza, and how it reffers back to the beginning. Nicely done!

Yeah so im definatly jealous!!!!!!!!!! this is amazing....all your poems are amaxing...5/5 for sure keep this up i really enjoy reading your work!

Wow!!! Awesome poem! You're great poet 5/5 for that, hope to read more soon!!! Keep it up!!

Ali

Excellent poem, I especially like the ending, the last stanza. Lots of emotions there.

I really have no complaints for this poem. =)

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(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

OMG these are amazing lines.
Keep writing.
5/5.

I love the title of this poem, and ideals in the poem itself compliment it perfectly. i love how the last line puts a more confident edge on the poem, while at the same time contradicting it.
stef/xx

Lovely poem - it gave a real sense of emotion and I enjoyed reading it 5/5 =)

This is one feels when one lost the love of their life. Heartfelt poem I must say.

'I love you, I miss you
But I'm not going to cry.'
These lines perfectly bring out the meaning of this poem.

Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece. =)

You did a really good job expressing your emotions in this poem.

I also love this one. I love how you write. The last stanza is flawless.

Great job!

You are pouring out talent and its been my privaledge to read these keep em comming

jeremy

Beautiful poem! I would have have to say definately 5/5

Wow! I'm speechless. This was a fantastic peice. I thought the flow was great! Didn't feel rocky at all. And I loved the way you expressed your emotions in this one. It was very well written. Pleasure to read =) Keep up the fantastic work! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

@...wow...im speechless..u have this perfect rhythm in ur poems that makes them that much better:):)...keep on writting:):)...@

Its Weird That I've Had The Chance To View This Poem At a Time Where It Really Relates To Me...You Already Had Me At 5.0 When I Read This "You fall in my tear.
You're part of my substance
Of what makes me," I Knew It Would Only Get Better, And I'm Always Right...Keep It Up...I'm a Fan
xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

I thought this was beautifully worded. Particularly liked these lines

I love you, I miss you
But you are still here
Cause whenever I'm lonely
You fall in my tear.

This had a lovely flow almost like a tear lol. Sweet and enjoyable piece.

So sweet...........and very romantic poem! i felt the sweetness w/ this poem its great! 5/5