A Crimson Farewell

by DMG   Oct 18, 2005


Hello to whom I haven't missed,
The cold lips which I once kissed.
Again you have returned to me,
Are you pleased with what you see?
The crimson tide has pulled me down.
Will you save me or shall I drown?
Or have you aided with this sea?
In which I sink so endlessly.
The red water fills my eyes
As my soul drifts in cloudy skies.
I give thanks to that crimson kiss
From whom has set me free from this
So goodbye all, farewell, goodnight,
At least my wrongs have been made right.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah

    Strong & touching feelings...5/5 keep it up, Great job...

  • 14 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Amazing! This is so well written. I don't know what to say! It's a spectacular piece and the ending is awesome! Keep it up~Holly

  • 14 years ago

    by jaki

    Very touching, this could almost fit in the dark category... great use of the rhyming words =) well done

    *jackie*