A Crimson Farewell

by DMG   Oct 18, 2005

Hello to whom I haven't missed,
The cold lips which I once kissed.
Again you have returned to me,
Are you pleased with what you see?
The crimson tide has pulled me down.
Will you save me or shall I drown?
Or have you aided with this sea?
In which I sink so endlessly.
The red water fills my eyes
As my soul drifts in cloudy skies.
I give thanks to that crimson kiss
From whom has set me free from this
So goodbye all, farewell, goodnight,
At least my wrongs have been made right.


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah

    Strong & touching feelings...5/5 keep it up, Great job...

  • 14 years ago


    Amazing! This is so well written. I don't know what to say! It's a spectacular piece and the ending is awesome! Keep it up~Holly

  • 14 years ago

    by jaki

    Very touching, this could almost fit in the dark category... great use of the rhyming words =) well done