Writing On The Wall (2nd version)

by Fighter (Ariane L.)   Oct 18, 2005


Sitting in her car, Lisa waits for the light to change.
Darkness envelops the city as she listens to music.
Drumming the steering wheel, humming the words.
Lost in her music, she notices not the depiction.

Painted on a building, a writing on the wall.
Chaos is shown on the mural, black and red.
A girl lies on the ground, blood from her head.
Not too far from her, her car stands in a wreck.

People surround the victim, yet no sign of the culprit.
People rush to help her, not realizing it's too late.
Her motionless body lies on the ground, helpless.
On the mural, someone's reality is shown.

As the light turns green, Lisa continues her journey.
Lost in her music, she notices not the other car.
In a hurry, the driver rushes by his stop.
Only when it's too late, does he see her vehicule.

Lying on the pavement, praying to end her misery.
People rush to save her, chaos echos in the night.
Slowly losing touch with reality, she fades into the light.
Her eyes close one last time, writing on the wall.

*real meaning of; writing on the wall: a warning. but of course, i had to use it both ways... lol

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Don't worry about me hun, the pain has faded... slowly, but it's almost all gone now :) i love you, don't ever forget that!! take care and stay strong.
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by AnorexicDream

    I love you too hunny mwah thanks i would take all your pain away too. you dont deserve it i love you mwah i know theres nothing really to say to make it better people have been trying but they havent done a good job well i love you but i have to get off the computer before my dad gets home so
    love ya tons and bunches
    mwah mwah mwah
    *hugs tight back*
    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by AnorexicDream

    Hey hun! thanks for all the comments im glad you like my story thing
    i love you
    and no things arent getting better they are getting worst my best friend cleaver killed herself last night and i am taking it really hard she is my 10th friend to kill herself this year.
    i love you
    love amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    2nd version the best hun xox

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    This sort of reminds me of a novel I read once. very intriguing write. keep up the good work

    (I think you mispelled 'darkness')