Single Red Rose

by Fighter (Ariane L.)   Oct 20, 2005


As I walk towards him, his hands hide something.
A huge grin breaks on his face when he notices me.
Taking his hand from his back, a single red rose.
He hands it to me as a kiss lands on my lips, magical.

The softness of his lips weakens my legs.
The passion in his eyes makes my heart grow weak.
The melody of his voice sends shivers down my spine.
Love lingers in the air as he looks me in the eyes.

Whispering soft words in my ear, melody of his voice.
Whispering "I love you", true passion echoes.
Locked in an embrace, safety within his arms.
No longer fearing love, I whisper "I love you too".

*not my best, I know...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Wow... thank you guys so much!!!! you have no idea how much that means to me :D thank you.

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Hun if dont stop being so modest i will beat u ova the head with a very large stick! lol its a gr8 write and one im glad i read as i wont be able to get on a computer for at least a week! :(

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    It was strange, I hardly read the words, and just got the general feeling, and it had a dreamy, best-day-of-your-life feelings, which I think was nice.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Awwwww *tears* not your best!? it was wonderful, you've captured almost every girls secret dream right there! Your amazing, keep it up! I LOVE YOU haha *sorry im in a very happy mood*

    Stay strong
    Jenny

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