It's The World

by x-Beth-x   Oct 22, 2005


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The world is so dark
So cold and so mean,
But so many things are hidden,
Things people have never seen,

When the leaves drop from the trees,
And the world turns cold,
Thats when I feel right,
Thats when things unfold,

Things move so fast,
Before your eyes,
That people take life for granted,
The life in their heart dies,

Missing things like,
The love of your life right in front of your face,
Or your best friend,
Who can't find their place,

The universe is so big,
And us so small,
The stars so secretive,
Wish when they fall,

I used to spend my life,
With everyone against me,
Now I have more friends,
Now I can really see,

Life that way was sad,
Life that way was dull,
My days were always bad,
And almost never full,

When I look up into the night's sky,
I see a whole new world right there,
So much bigger than here,
And so much more to find,

But why worry about finding whats there,
When everything here hasn't been found yet?,

So the next time you see a falling star,
Make a wish,
It might actually come true,
And might do this bad world some good,

-Anarchy

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    This was probably my favorite poem of yours out of the ones i have read i don't really get why you stopped rhyming for the last 3 stanzas maybe it's just me but this definatly i dont think was a free verse poem so it should all rhyme or it all shouldnt ya know? i dunno i could be wrong lol but yeah i really liked this i love your point of veiw it's very positive

    Things move so fast,
    Before your eyes,
    That people take life for granted,
    The life in their heart dies

    that was my favorite part great job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 poem...totally agree...gr8 messge...keep up the gr8 work! 5/5!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by DBM

    Hey-lo! Remember Me? I Just thought I'd repay your kindness by reading some of your poetry... Awesomeness!!! lol ^.^ I added you to my Fav's. Well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I like this poem, it has a great message for all of us. It's also well written. 5/5

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