The dark path [PART ONE]

by lostlllsoul   Oct 23, 2005


The dark path
Filled with anguish and hate
Starts with a single step
Don't hesitate

Let it lead you
Meandering through the world underneath
So painful and true
From here u can never leave

Where the dead rise
Where hatred and pain show
A sight so intoxicating
There's alot more to go

Now take your blade
This is where we begin
Slash your wrists
Release the pain within

Let the crimson grow
Let your anger go wild
You have nothing to lose
Don't be afraid dear child

Release the blade
And move on in line
To enter the casket
Embroiled in vines

Now slowly creep in
And rest your soul
Finally, you'll be born
Into the darkness and cold!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    He he he.....evillll...waow its real good..i love it!
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Kyle Cassells

    Well met my brother... great wording..... and nicley put together also

  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I like. :p i usualy like longer poems but this ones pretty good. i'll give ya a five and check out some more of your poems. c ya.

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    I really thought ur comments were funny.

    yeah, i got part of a visualization there. i need part two to get both! lol.

    i really have a hard time doing sequels... see in "Blades of Immortality" it was great but in "Rotten fruits of the harvest" geez iono o_o u kno how to write sequels? comment back a.s.a.p. pls :)

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    OMG...I can't believe this...this is one of the best I've seen on this site...cool...I'm speecless.

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