Rest In Peace

Beautiful! This one made me think, deep. As do all your poems, but this one, deeper then the others. I loved the lines

Grass trodden
Flowers bent
Cheeks sodden
Uncommon consent

It was smooth and well worded, and all in all, beautifully written

5/5

Stolen identity
No longer myself
Twisted serenity
Rest in peace, in health

Wonderful opening.

A crack in the earth
Where I will awaken
Question my worth
Allow myself to be taken

powerful ending

Again you have done one heck of a job. the imagery was wonderfully vivid and the emtion was powerful. This is the best poem of your I have read. I really like it more than all the others, I was just astonished, by your talent. 5/5

I liked this it's not one of my favorites like the top few which means your improving so good job!

I am not sure if this poem is about you, or about someone else, but either way, I really feel this poem. I have lost someone extremely close to me. I also have felt this way at times. You capture a wonderful, melancholy mood here, and the sorrow resonates off the page! I love it!!

Wow, very dark and depressing. Great flow and wording though. I can actually picture this whole poem in my head, creepy. 5/5 Great job!

Innoc3ntStar