Apples (has nothing to do w/ the fruit)

by InMyWorld   Oct 23, 2005


I'm not sure if this is done...any comments will be appreciated and I'm open to suggestions about where to go from here, and yes, its a song, so its not really poetic...just thoughtful.

So i start this verse of my infidelity
and they're all shaking their heads
too long i was oblivious, but so was everyone else
except for you, oh you know me so well
i can't betray the constant and now
my honesty suffers

i had you in the palm of my hand
i took it for granted and then when you drifted
was it really me wanting to pull you back? But i couldn't, i wouldn't...
and i realized.
You'd been my security
and that was my first mistake
so i denied, but you knew
oh how you know me so well

i hope you never believed my excuses
i tried so hard to make things be how i wanted them to be
but life had something else in mind
yeah my love was true, but fate called it misplaced
i guess things never really changed

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Thats a very good collection of thoughts. maybe want a bit of reorganisasion but the idea and concept is defantly there and well written.

  • 18 years ago

    by disorientated

    Wow....that is really well written, a collection of thoughts.
    remind me of my own work, sometimes just the inner workings of your brain can suffice as a masterpiece, as you demonstrate here!

    10/10 grand job!