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Wow i really liked this poem
too bad you didnt write it
oh well it is a great poem anyways

A very sad and depressing peice. A very good write however. Different from your love poems, but you write with your emotions. That's great :)

This is a very concise poem about a very bad feeling. A well put together poem and says a lot in a few words.Why have you put it under your name if you didn't write it? Sadly fountains of blood may seem like an escape but learning to live well is much better than dying of cowardice.

Thanks for commenting on my poem, whether u wrote this or not it is brilliant. not all poems have to be long to be good. I write more dark poems such as this one, and this one beats all of mine by a mile.