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by Live, Laugh, Love   Oct 19, 2006


Everything has turned around
Love now Hate
Compassion now fear
Wanting to be together
Wantiing to be alone
I want love
I want happiness
I'm sick of crying, and being alone
I want my love back
You have broken my heart
But you can have a piece
I love you but I need something new
And I know you do too
We've made it this far
And I would love to try for more

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww beautifuly written. but it was sad too. i know how it feels though. if you need to talk i'm here for you. great write! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Short but an excellent poem... i know the feeling, wonderful job conveying the need for something more... i can almost hear you pleading with him... great job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Minkus

    Nice job on this one; I felt your want for something more than what you have and I think you conveyed the feeling quite well. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Great Job! Usually I choose which lines I like the best but I love them all! Your rhyming was excellent, in the few places there was some. Great Job!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Angie

    Sweet poem. Short but great. The only this i'd take a look into would be adding a bit of punctuation maybe, or even possibly adding some detail. But other then that, amazing write! Keep up the awesome work! 5/5

    --Angie xoxo