Roto otra vez

by Jamie   Oct 23, 2005


This is funny cause it sucks so much but we had to write a poem in spanish and no this isnt the one i turned in as it's about depression and stuff but i thought i'd post it so you can laugh at it..cause it's terrible you can tell i dont speak spanish lol

Its truly hurts to see you go
Demasiadas l¡grimas que he difundido
Cause what you see isnt always what you get
Usted no puede matar el fuego que usted lit

It hurts because youll never know
Usted dejo mi vida tan desordenado
The words never disperse from my head
He sangrado bastante para usted

My improvement began to show
Yo finalmente pens fui hecho
I began crying and bleeding less and less
Hasta que usted me rompiera como antes

I have failed with great sucsess
He roto la misma manera dos veces
And as these feelings harshly grow
Las muñecas han pagado el precio

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Its truly hurts to see you go
too many tears I have diffused
Cause what you see isnt always what you get
You cannot kill the fire that you lit

It hurts because youll never know
You left my so life so messy
The words never disperse from my head
I have bled enough for you

My improvement began to show
I finally was done
I began crying and bleeding less and less
Then you broke me like before

I have failed with great sucsess
I have broken the same way twice
And as these feelings harshly grow
My wrists have paid the price

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  • 18 years ago

    by yaRis

    Ola j well u said that' it was funny but u are so wrong... this isn' t funny it is very nice actually i mean u gave it ur all in a totally different languague and to me is really nice i did understand what ur trying to write.... i give u props for it ... any work that anyones does is not a joke is a piece of art to u and to sum people...keep it up is very nice and if u ever want to learn more spanish just look me up and write to me i'll teach u okay nice job....

  • Oh my god...i love love love this poem...keep up the great work is all i have to say...u r a very honest poet and u write what u feel and thats what i love most about it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    *Listening*

    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Well nice of u to add a translation:p if i knew spanish id probably appreciate it more but i still thought the poem was great:P
    thanks for your comments:)