The Absence of You

by Christopher Liau   Oct 24, 2005


Eyes closed so tight,
Flashing glimpses of you,
Eyes open, not in sight,
Oh how I miss your view.

To the horizon fade,
Minute in size and shape,
Oh how I wish I'd stayed,
Under the mountain scape.

Miss your touch so soft,
Your arms' warm embrace,
I would hold you aloft,
Bask at your beauty and grace.

Yearn for your sweetest kiss,
Lips so ripe and plump,
Wonderful, that time of bliss,
Faster, my heart does thump.

For now I will have to wait,
To be with you once more,
Let's not leave it up to fate,
For it's you that I adore.

© Christopher Fowler
24th October 2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by *Unbreakable Soul*

    Wow very well written i liked it so much 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aw.. this was written soo well i love it .. great job keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    This poem flow pretty flawless.

    "For now I will have to wait,
    To be with you once more,
    Let's not leave it up to fate,
    For it's you that I adore."

    I was expecting a powerful ending and you haven't let me down. I would put you on my favourite's list, but you are already there.

    This stanza is my favourite, especially the third line.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    The last sentance of the second stanza made no sense; how does a mountain scape tie into this poem? you should explain it better if you are going to add it in.

  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Awww soooo sweet !!
    I liked this alot, it's beautifully written.
    5/5

    xxx cici xxx

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