Thin

by eternitySOlong   Oct 25, 2005


When I look at her
I see what I can never be
When I look at her
I feel my insides make a plea

So little and so pretty
I hate to say she's perfect for you
So little and so pretty
My self-esteem is just out of view

Now it's my turn
Making myself become so small
Now it's my turn
Maybe now you'll give me a call

Becoming what you want
I'm killing the person I've finally built
Becoming what you want
My throat now holds so much guilt

So diminished already
But I'm still bigger than her
So diminished already
She seems to be what you prefer

Looking at you
My stomach hurts and aches
Looking at you
I'll do whatever it takes

Molding me now
Help me start, help me begin
Molding me now
Make me her, make me thin

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  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Awe omgsh i can relate to this too...so true...gosh wht wont we do for boys we love? lol but yeah you are seriously an amazing writer...thank you so much for the comments! its crazy to think someone s gifted as you would like my writing! thanks again nd everyday i try to read another of your poems its tking me a while lol!

    much

  • 18 years ago

    by blindedxxbyxxlove

    Some one gave you a 1...this is a good poem baby...why didnt you let me see it? (I gave you a 5 cause im not gay,only with you, lol).

  • 18 years ago

    by blindedxxbyxxlove

    Baby girl........sissy i love you and you know that right? I owould do anything just to see you happy again. You dont need to be thin like s kan k is. Your beautifull, smart, funny, and perfect just the way you are baby trust me, Please. I wouldnt lie to you. Dont let him make you think otherwise okay? Where's my happy gay-like sissy gone to? Oh were oh were could she be? I love you sissy be strong. You can get through this.***kisses***

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