It hurts

by Ella   Oct 25, 2005


It hurts me to see you sad
It hurts me when you're down
It hurts me to see you mad
So turn that frown upside down

It hurts me when I hurt you
The last thing I'd ever want to do
Is hurt the one I love, intentionally
How unloving would that be

The thing that breaks my heart
The thing that hurts me most
Is knowing that you don't know
How much I love you so

plz comment (this is my first poem)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Meg Carpenter

    Wicked good ella. Keep up the good work. I thought I'd comment on ur poems coz u commented on one of mine. Thanks for it by the way.

    ~Meg~

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    This may be your first poem, but judging by this, you picked the right hobby when you picked up that pen! You're really talented, and if you choose, you'll go far!
    PV

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Ella,

    This poem is completly adorable. Simpple loving and cute. lol I dont know what else to say so I will leave it at that =) well done, I hope to hear from you more in the club forums!

    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by kida

    This is gr8 luv the emotion and intensity. it really is true dat wen u love sum 1 u want dem 2 b happy no matter wat i hav learnt dat. plz read and comment sum of mine.

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!

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