I'll always remember you.

by avery   Oct 25, 2005


I told you I could trust you,
Tell you anything,
But you just hit me harder,
Like our trust was nothing,

I said I loved you,
And you know I wouldn't lie,
It's always been hard until now,
To tell you goodbye.

I told you everything,
Every detail about my life,
Whenever I've felt happy,
Or about to take the knife,

I promised I'll never forget you,
And that promise I can keep,
For now I'll remember you,
As the boy who made me forever weak.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Psychotic Heart

    Another awesome poem, i can so relate. 5/5. wow you're really good. Simple yet effective.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I can relate to all of this, well done, it was sad, sorry to hear of this. But keep writing such amazing poems
    xxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Loved it! so much emotion and truley amazing... i serioulsy love this poem becasue its so true and heartfelt. good job and keep it up!

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    Wow this poem is soo good, it is so true also its a sad reality, alot of relationships turn out like this and its hard for many girls to get out of them, i just hope your ok, your an amazing writer and i would hate loosing you to someone like him

    lots of love
    *~*Becky*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    Very cute but sad. Love hurts to say the least. SMile and think of the good not the bda.
    ~~Sweetie

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