Betrayed

by Kurt   Oct 26, 2005


Betrayed by a friend
Stabbed in the back
And you always wonder why
Friends are what i lack

Who needs friends
When your like me
Those who hurt me most
The ones who make me bleed

Venom oozes from the wound
And i black out
Its already too late
I have no doubts

Why is this done to me
Why do i have this luck
What makes you think
I even give a F...

You lied too much
Broken my trust
I hope you like your life
Thats based on lust

When you burn in hell
I hope you see my face
Leaving a memory
You can't erase

You knew that i loved her
You seduced her still
Against all my pleas
I hope you got your thrill

In the last 20 minutes
My life has burned away
Im so pissed off
I dont know what to say

I hate you now
One things for sure
Infected with a poison
For which there is no cure

Little by little
You broke your ties
With the flame lit
By all of your lies

So leave me alone
Leave me be
Dont be the one
To reassure me

Your no better
Than those you said you hate
What i dont get
Is why its such a trait

Everyone i know
Everyone i trust
Our friendship
Just fell to dust!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is really good...
    Powerfully written, strong imagery that creates vivid pictures and you can feel the anger radiating from the written words.
    Beautiful work.

  • 17 years ago

    by heather

    OMG this is soo good. i wish i could write as good as you

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Yeah, I've been there. It's a very crappy situation to be in, especially when you think this person is your blood brother. I thought I could have trusted my friend, and he lets out one of my deepest secrets. Definitely not cool. Anyways another great write. Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by ash

    Wow, this is great!It has a lot of emotion, and I think it's good!You really put a lot of time and work into this, and it shows.

  • 18 years ago

    by HJ

    Great poem, and in someways very true. Wonderful flow. I always find that writing from the heart is the hardest things to do and pull off, but you tackled it beautifully.

    Thank you so much for your comments. When you get chance check out my latests poems "Rivers of the Heart"and "Love and War" I would be interested in your opinion.

    I look forward to reading more from you.

    Regards
    Hayley