Thoughts In The Night

by LOnightOJmareVE   Oct 28, 2005


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As cold air dominates the night,
thoughts of warmth are within me.
Pondering of this, I feel,
Or is it merely what I see, not for real.

The wind starts rattling and blowing,
but within me, is calmness.
Resisting the subtle urge,
to express this inappropriate feelings with boldness.

Suddenly, leaves are falling,
and my heartbeat starts rising.
Probably it is a fault comprehending
some things, without realizing.

Subsequently, there, comes the snow;
Branches are left alone and it is white all around.
Then, I decided to set-aside the feelings,
Until I hear my heart's genuine sound.

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