Sadness

by Lily   Oct 31, 2005


In the darkness i can still hear you crying all alone, all by yourself. I wanted to crawl over to you and comfort you in some sort of way, but i refrained. I couldn't make myself do it and i just couldn't bear to hear you. I walked away and left you all alone, that was the biggest mistake of my life. I still hear you crying when i sleep at night you still haunt my mind. I always think about you and i wonder deep into the night, while it's raining outside, where could you be? If maybe one day; will i ever be able to change my mistake?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sylent1

    Wow I got a haunting feeling from this poem. I could picture it in my head. Good job! I go through those same emotions too.

  • 17 years ago

    by megann anne

    This was deep..... i just dont really understand.... i read ur profile and i kno that there must be a great sadness in your life... it is just hard to understand if you dont really kno

  • 17 years ago

    by capnoats

    Thanks for your comment :)
    I like you poem to, deffinatly sad and thought provoking.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rick

    Awesome poem, i see it representing a problem, very cool, a cry for help, its inspired me

  • 18 years ago

    by so in loveee

    Good poem...i understand how hard that is..its good though...do me a favor check out my poems...thanks..

    if u want u can email me at summababii78@yahoo.com

    *~*allison*~*

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