Maybe She's Dancing

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Oct 31, 2005


Maybe she's lying,
Through her untold smile,
Maybe she's defying,
Everyone around.
Maybe she's lost,
In a tide of uncertainty,
Maybe she's crossed,
A line farther then she could tread.
And maybe she's dancing,
To a song inside her head,
maybe she's just waiting,
To be told what to do.
Maybe all she's asking,
Is to be held onto,
Yet maybe shes masking,
All her feelings toward you.
But who will care;
This girl that never speaks,
Maybe she'll share,
This life she can not bare.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xXx Allison xXx

    Please, you really are beginning to scare me. you write like i've never known someone to write before. i'm becoming obsessed with finding more of your poems to read. i simply cannot believe what my mind is telling me. is it real?

    lis'

  • 17 years ago

    by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-

    WOW I dont know what to say! well done, amazing poem!
    i really like the last 4 lines, great finish
    love mel

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*im_the_best_at_ruining _my_life*~

    Wow this is very gracefull seemed like the words just flowed...if u know what i mean....

  • 17 years ago

    by *Sweet as your worst nightmare*

    Great job it almost sounds as if you are describing yourself in a subconsious way... you have a great word choice

    keep it up

    Bri

  • 17 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Hum, the end, was that "bear" or "bare" that you meant. Either way, that was strong. I liked it... especially the part about dancing, as sometimes I feel like moving to a song inside my head, too!
    Yes, well, that's what three years of dancing does to you, at the end you can't stop.
    I also liked the lines Through her untold smile, because that was a very ingenius way of saying that she didn't smile.

    //T.L.//

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