What perfect would be

by e LIZ a beth   Oct 31, 2005


Want to know what perfect would be?
if you took my hand
and danced in the rain with me

slowly i would turn to you
and slowly we would kiss
and as you start to let me go
i would feel a suden bliss

this feeling over powers me
its nothing like the rest
but if there is one thing i know
its that this feeling is the best

i want this moment to never end
i dont want for it to go
cause for the moment that you kissed me
my heart melted like snow

i want for you to hold me close
i want to die in your arms
cause when im with you
i fell as though i cant be harmed

so please just capture this moment
as if it is our last
cause sometimes you never realize
just how life goes by so fast

i want to be with you forever
i want to dance in the rain
i want us to be together
cause your what keeps me sane

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  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    OMG i knoe were not talking and all but w.e i dc THIS POEM IS F_ing AMAZING!!! love the first stanza it TOTALLY rocks my flip flops... BOTH OF THEM!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Cute......very realistic, I think it needs to flow a little better, but over all, good job! ****