The Truth About Forever

by dollwithafrown   Nov 2, 2005


The truth about forever
Forever doesn't last
And if you want to keep it
It will sweep into the past

The truth about forever
Forever is not real
So don't believe the stories
Just believe what you feel

The truth about forever
You can never find
It's confusing and misleading
And messes with your mind

The truth about forever
It has long time fled
And you'll never find forever
Because forever is dead

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  • 17 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    I enjoyed reading this piece. The repetition of the first line added something special. I like the rhyming, and the way it was written; very well. You did a good job on this.

    5/5

    -Briana

  • 19 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really enjoyed this as well.
    I thought it was very creative and unique.
    Well written, good flow and wording.
    Another excellent write from you.

  • 20 years ago

    by MEG!@$%

    Wow that was awesome! it flowed really well and yeah it was just great! :)

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