Reality, pain and rejection included.

by Jamie   Nov 3, 2005


Can you suppress the expectations?
How do you keep the hope on low?
Can you prevent the painful landing?
Or soften each striking blow?

Is there a path to get around it?
Even if its far out of your way
Is it possible to live pain free?
Even if only for a day

You can say you keep yourself
From letting yourself care too much
But your words are just a band aid
And your skin still stings to touch

When you can predict the falling
Is there anyway to comfort the crash?
When the fire finally dies out
Can we be anything but bitter ash?

When talking just wont help
And you dont have energy to bleed
How can you light up the darkness?
Without losing what you need

So since there isn't any way
It seems we're flirting with our pain
No way to dodge the hurt
And feelings we can't explain

We'll stagger and we'll stumble
Until we fall down face first
It seems we're never on our feet
But always at our worst

It's not that I'm so negative
That I dont try to see the good
It's just the pain is always ahead
So secretive and not understood

It lurks and writhes with passion
As it tangles under our skin, it's sly
It comes from every direction
Doesn't even stop to let you cry

And you cant get around it
You'll fall down hard and lose
There no such thing as avoidance
Or recovery for each touchy bruise

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Jamie, another great one, personally I like this one more then the other one I commented on, but in all, your poems are great. The rhymes were simple, but the flow was perfect... FROM ONE POET TO ANOTHER: It isn't how well a poem rhymes or how it fits together, it the emotion that is expressed...as long as you are truly showing how you feel, its an Amazing Poem!

    XOXO
    Kayla

  • 18 years ago

    by shadowlight

    Brilliant poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Awesome poem hun, as usual.
    i gotta say this bit stood out for me the most:
    When talking just wont help
    And you dont have energy to bleed
    How can you light up the darkness?
    Without losing what you need

    god all of it is so incredibly true...awesome work xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow. And you don't like this poem you wrote? Are you crazy? It's beautiful! I really really enjoyed reading this. And the rhymes aren't simple at all. Something like *me-free* would be simple, but it's not like that at all!

    Mine are always simple haha, I'm trying to improve my english, which is pretty hard when you are talking dutch all day haha. Anyway.. off-topic, sorry. Also thanks for your comment on my poem, it really meant a lot for me, cause you are very inspiring for me! EXCELLENT!

  • 18 years ago

    by Karla Gordon

    Nice poem!! Good job!