Faces of the Moon (3 & 4)

by Darien   Nov 4, 2005


Faces of the Moon (Part 3)
- Breakdown

I feel cold and alone,
my heart has left my side.
I wonder if I'm dreaming,
my wrist hurts, it is real.

She walked out on me,
left me for another guy.
I thought we were inseparable,
but forever had it's end.

I'm hugging my knees,
and I'm softly crying.
Slowly losing my mind,
she is all I think about.

My skin turns pale,
and the moon does follow.
I'm breaking down now,
I need to feel free.

Faces of the Moon (Part 4)
- Murder

I'm standing on her porch,
waiting for her to leave.
She broke my heart tonight,
all I want is my revenge.

A blade in my hand,
that will aim for her heart.
I'll rip it right out,
and smash it on the floor.

I'll smile as she bleeds,
the satisfaction of her death.
All the pain she has caused,
given to her all at once.

The moon bleeds red again,
blood has been spilled tonight.
Tears fall from my face,
for the hearts that are broken.

*Inspired by the Boys Night Out album (Trainwreck)*

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxSilent Tearsxx

    Cool poem

  • 17 years ago

    by jessel jane

    Great one really

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Hmm. Pretty cool, I like how you were inspired by that song. Yes, this is a dark poem, I get pretty good imagery at the part where she's bleeding and your smiling..good stuff.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    Wow, dark stuff, but I guess I know how you feel. It will never cease to amaze me how people can communicate so much whilst keeping to a such a well formed structure! I love your writing, keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Darien,
    Can we ever get enough? lol your poems are sooooooooooo great! I can't find any words to describe the beauty of your poetry... touching and wonderfull poem Darien!