Poem Of Rhymes (part 1)

by Matthew A.   Nov 5, 2005


This is a poem that I hope is right,
since I wrote this poem in the middle of the night.

I am so bored that I figured that I just might
go outside and go fly a kite.

Or maybe I will go outside and go start a fight,
but probably go get a bite.

Thanks to the light that is so freaking bright,
I have a wonderful sight.

It hurts, though, when I look directly into the light,
so I pray that it will be a clear evening tonight.

I might go to a building and worship its great height
and say " boy this building is so tight".

But if somebody says that they may know who I like,
I will go after them and hit them in the head with a metal pipe.

When they wake up, all they will see is the color white.
If they ask me if their in the hospital and smile and say quiet.

This is the last line of rhymes I that I can think of to write.
Please tell me if you think this poem is right.

*if there is other words that I forgot to use tell me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by CourtneyLouxxx

    Im confuzzled............v. good.
    trappedxoxox
    could u comment on mine if u have time

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    I love your poems! my favorite part of this one is about if someone tells you who you like the youll run after them and hit them in the head with a meatal pipe! lol that part got me rolling on the floor! well c-ya around.
    if you have time please take time and read and comment on some of my poems. it means a lot to me...
    -thornton

  • 18 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    Nice poem I read it this weekend

  • 18 years ago

    by ciara loves ronnie

    Well its was good.. but pipe and like dont rhyme with any of it. but thats the only thing i see. i was a funny poem lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Good poem, I liked it,